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【健康类】：

Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’sduty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree ordisagree? 保持健康是个人对于社会的责任，但是，不是使个人受益的良好习惯，是否认同?

相关提问：

【健康类】：

The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet,while others believe it is individuals’ responsibility. Discuss both views andgive your own opinion. 政府有责任保障人们的健康饮食，健康饮食是个人的责任，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。

【作家立场】：保持健康是尽公民的社会责任，但是，更是对于个人有利的良好习惯。

【新东方网薛鹏思路拓展】：

为何保持健康是尽到了社会责任：

1. 个人保持身体健康是个人履行社会责任的体现，因为个人减少了对于国家医疗资源的消耗。

2.如果个人的健康没有保证，难以保证工作的质量，工作的效率低，无法为社会做出应有贡献。相反，健康公民可以创造社会财富，为国家发展注入新鲜活力。

为何保持健康是良好的个人习惯，对于个人有利：

1. 对于个人的利好：增加乐观和自信，减少忧虑，人生态度更加积极乐观。健康者通常为热爱运动者，通过运动可以结实好友，这就意味着快乐的源泉更多。

2. 对于家庭的利好：可以想象，个人健康状况令人担忧，家人必然痛苦和担忧(例如企业家和文体明星)，因此个人健康可以使人乐观地实现家庭的和谐。

3. 对于事业和学业的利好：个人健康可以提高学习和工作效率，使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战。

【新东方网薛鹏原创范文赏析】：

首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场雅思阅读技巧

Health is to every individual what perfume is to flowers. However, peoplehave been pondering, for many years, the significance of maintaining personalhealth without reaching any definite consensus, a popular belief is thatpersonal health only serves the good of the community. As I see it, optimizingpersonal health could not only serve the good of the community，but moreimportantly，conduce to individual life, family harmony and careerprosperity.

{解析}：Health is to every individual what perfume is to flowers健康对于每个人，如同花香对于花朵。

{解析}：a popular belief is that ……一种流行的观点就是……

{解析}：optimizing personal health v 完善个人健康

{解析}：conduce to individual life, family harmony and career prosperityv有助于个人生活，家庭和睦，事业辉煌

二段：正方观点：为何保持健康是尽到了社会责任

Indeed, keeping fit could be of great benefits for a nation and thereforebe deemed as the personal obligation to the community. In other words, As forthe country，the increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatlydiminish the consumption in terms of the public medical treatment. Also, healthindicates good mentality and vigorous physique. It is conceivable that theincrease of healthy social citizens will create immense social value and thusinject new vitality into the further development of a nation.

{解析}：could be of great benefits for a nation v对于国家有利好

{解析}：The increased proportion of wholesome citizens could greatly diminishthe consumption in terms of the public medical treatment.健康公民的增加会减少社会公共医疗的消耗。

{解析}：Health indicates good mentality and vigorous physique.健康意味着健良好的心态和充沛的体能。

{解析}：create immense social value and thus inject new vitality into thefurther development of a nation v 创造巨大的价值，为国家的发展注入新鲜活力。

三段：反方观点：为何保持健康对于个人有利好：

Every individual could become the beneficiary of keeping fit. First, ahealthy people succeed better at work，respond better to stress, suffer fewerdepressive mood and achieve more personal goals. Secondly, health could, tolarge extent, enable one to brave career enthusiastically and harmonize familyoptimistically. For example, many business leaders or super stars usually sufferfrom various health-related problems due to excessive workload and huge mentalpressure. It is conceivable that one’s poor health condition will inevitablybring a sea of agonies to the family members

{解析}：Every individual could become the beneficiary of……人人都可以成为……的受益者

{解析}：A healthy people succeed better at work，respond better to stress, sufferfewer depressive mood and achieve more personal goal.健康者工作更有成效，积极应对压力，较少沮丧，可以实现更多个人目标。

{解析}：…… enable one to brave career enthusiastically and harmonize familyoptimistically. …… 使人精力充沛地应对事业的挑战，以及乐观地实现家庭的和谐。

{解析}： …… will inevitably bring a sea of agonies to the family members ……不可避免地给健康带来巨大的痛苦

尾段：再次亮明观点：

In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that keeping fit is not only relatedto social responsibility but also links to personal happiness, which is moresignificant.

{解析}：Keeping fit is not only related to social responsibility but also linksto personal happiness, which is more significant.保持健康，不仅仅是和社会责任相关，同时，于个人相关相关，而后者，意义更加重要。

作者介绍：

薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥)，新东方网专栏作家，高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》，每年创作20万字原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历)，前长春新东方功勋教师，多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作7.5分，托福写作29分)。

爱生活，爱运动，爱音乐电影，爱旅行美食，爱读书摄影，更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台，主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。

大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军，全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

对于各类写作课程有精深研究，授课方式行云流水，妙语连珠，知识底蕴深厚，对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

教学理念：Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水，而是点燃一把火)

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