2015年8月29日雅思写作预测及语料库_重庆雅思
2015-08-21 08:59
来源:新东方网
作者:薛鹏
[薛鹏寄语]:
雅思写作一般和是年轻人的成长和选择息息相关的题目,或者是考查年轻人对于社会热点问题的关注和理解。题目出现,必须让年轻人有话可说,引起共鸣。
8月13日考察久违的冷题:如何帮助游客消除在旅行者中产生的文化偏见,角度较冷。针对8月29日的雅思备考:利弊讨论;两种观点讨论为一类备考热点焦角度,是否同意一种观点,分析问题解决问题为二类备考热点角度。
雅思写作的热点:一类题目会集中在:教育类;科技类;社会类;广告类;犯罪类;环保类;政府类。二类的热点:工作选择类;交通能源类;文化抽象类;古老建筑等;本篇预测覆盖雅思四种经典提问角度,七大类热点话题,是全面备考。在8月29日以及接下来的备考中,手机的利弊,网络购物的利弊,网络办公的利弊,远程教育的利弊,电视话题为遗漏很久的话题,要重点备考。
如果预测题目无法压中,建议烤鸭1分钟审题,2分钟构思,35分钟完成大作文,2分钟检查大作文。18分钟写完小作文,2分钟检查小作文。注意小作文只要客观描述和比较,不要主观评论。建议烤鸭考前一定针对不同的提问角度(是否同意,利弊讨论,两种观点,分析问题)准备相关衔接的句型。针对7大热点话题准备相关观点句和例证。如果是新题出题,冷题出现,建议有有理有据的细节和论证展开行文,祝福你们。
写作难点:
1. 没有观点
2. 没有语言
3. 表达精彩
写作策略:精彩的语料库的输入到输出
一类重点:(10题)
[工作类]:
An increasing number of people change their career and place of residenceseveral times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?在一生中,很多选择改变他们的事业和居住地,这是积极的还是消极的(多元职业和候鸟生活的利弊)
[薛鹏点评]:简单的利弊讨论
作家立场:候鸟生活和多元职业是利大于弊
背景信息:英美人不是做一份工作终老一生,一生中会去很多城市生活,做很多份工作。
[工作类]:
Many young people choose to change their job after few years. Why? Do thedisadvantages outweigh the advantages? 很多年轻人,在工作几年以后,选择跳槽,讨论其利弊.
跳槽的动机:升官,发财,长本事。
[政府类]:
Educating children is expensive and in some countries the government payssome or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?政府给基础教育买单的利弊。
点评:写过了政府应该为基础教育买单,政府应该给高等教育买单就会融会贯通。
背景信息:三座民生大山:教育;住房;医疗,因此,政府的财政应该首要解决的就是普及免费教育,提高医疗福利,保障人民安居乐业。
[政府类]:
Towns and cities are attractive places. Some suggest the government shouldspend money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues to make themto live in. Do you agree or disagree? 有人建议政府应该投资艺术品,例如绘画和雕像,是否同意这个观点?
解析:本题角度为政府是否应该艺术投资,为艺术买单。变化提问角度是政府是否应该给艺术家(作家,画家)财政支持。
作家立场:政府应该艺术投资,但是,应该合理分配比例。
推荐理由:热题恒热;主题连考。
[科技类]:
In most countries, with the widespread of the use of Internet, people havemore freedom to choose to work and study at home instead of traveling to work orcollege. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?互联网的应用,使得人们可以在家庭里办公和学习,你认为是否利大于弊(远程教育和远程办公的利弊)
类似题目:
People can live and work anywhere they want to choose, because of improvedcommunication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this developmentoutweigh disadvantages? 因为科技和交通工具的发达,很多人可以在任何的地方工作和生活,讨论其利弊。
作家立场:远程办公和远程学习的利大于弊
点评:科技考察角度为科技产品对于人们生活的影响,集中热点为:网络教育;远程办公;远程购物。这些考点,为题库母题,遗漏很久,必然考察,惯性准备。
[科技类]:
Some people believe that printed books are no longer necessary in thisdigital era as all writings can be stored electronically. Others think thatprinted books still play an important role. Discuss both views and give youropinion. 有人认为,印刷书籍在电子时代不必存在,因为文字信息可以电子储备,有人认为印刷书籍依然有重要的作用,讨论两种观点。
点评:本题提问角度可以换成:有人认为手机的出现,会让书信完全消失,是否认同?
作家立场:电子书籍是传统书籍的补充,不是其替代品,传统书籍有存在的价值。
[科技类]:
Online shopping is now replacing shopping in store. Do you think it is apositive or negative development? 网络购物的利弊。
作家立场:网络购物是双刃刀,我们应该扬长避短。加强自我保护意识,加强对于网络购物的管理可以减少其消极影响。
相关提问:
[科技类]:
Nowadays, people perform their everyday tasks, such as banking, shopping aswell as business transactions, without the need of meeting other people face toface. What are the possible effects of the phenomenon on the individual and thesociety as a whole? 现在很多人可以通过网络做很多事情,例如购物和交易,这对于个人和社会的影响是什么?
作家立场:网络购物是双刃刀,有利有弊,我认为利大于弊,其弊端可以通过……被克服。
[抽象类]:
Some people think the main reason for success is hard work anddetermination. While other people think factors like money and personalappearance are also important. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.成功来自勤奋和坚定,成功来自财富和美貌。
点评:练习本题的意义是熟悉两种观点讨论。
作家立场:成功更多地来自勤奋和坚定,尽管美貌和财富可以为成功加分。
[薛鹏点评]:什么叫做梦想,梦想就是朝思暮想,时刻都想,梦想就是可以为了一个目标不计代价,倾其所有。梦儿追的我累,可以我不后退,因为我想象中的美,一定能擦去我心中的泪,梦是宝贝。
[健康类]:
The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet,while others believe it is individuals’ responsibility. Discuss both views andgive your own opinion. 政府有责任保障人们的健康饮食,健康饮食是个人的责任,讨论两种观点,给出你的意见。
作家立场:保持健康是个人和政府的责任,但是,个人应该承担更多的责任。
[环保类]:
Some people think environmental problem are too big for individuals tosolve. Others, however, think that those problems cannot be solved unlessindividuals take some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有人认为环境问题个人无法解决,有人认为个人可以解决环保问题。
点评:重点谈及个人如何环保:简单生活,提高环保意识;周边游不是长途游,坐公共交通工具;做环保志愿者;参加环保组织。
二类重点10题:(建议准备观点句)
[科技类]:
Some people think that museums are getting less important, when people canhave access to information on the Internet, to what extent do you agree ordisagree? 有人认为博物馆不重要,我们可以在网络上获得信息(参观博物馆),是否认同?
解析:网络浏览图片是否可以代替亲自游览
作家立场:网络浏览图片无法代替亲自游览,艺术馆和美术馆有其不可替代性。
[社会类]:重庆雅思
Currently many people fail to balance the work with the other parts oflives, what are the reasons and how to solve it?现在,人们很难平衡工作和生活的其他部分,讨论其原因再提出解决方法。
点评:社会类的热点话题。
解析:生活的其他部分:个人爱好;健康管理;娱乐时间;和谐家庭……
[广告类]:
Nowadays, customers are facing increasing advertisements with thecompetition of different companies. To what extent do you think customers areinfluenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect thecustomers? 现在广告愈来愈多,广告在多大的程度上影响了消费者,如何保护消费者?
点评:谈及广告的弊端和解决策略。
点评:广告考察过一场,角度较冷,本题继续准备。广告话题,一旦考察,最热角度:废除广告;广告的影响和解决;儿童广告的利弊。
[媒体类]:
Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people saythey have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they arejust harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your ownopinion?电影和游戏中含有暴力元素,因此受欢迎,有人认为他们对于社会的影响是消极的,有人认为,他们仅仅是无害的娱乐方式,讨论两种观点?
点评:本题角度覆盖了政府,传媒,教育成长,因此,是综合考题。
作家立场:支持政府传媒审查。
[健康类]:
Staying healthy by playing sports and eating well should be an individual’sduty to society rather than a habit for personal benefits. Do you agree ordisagree? 保持健康是个人对于社会的责任,但是,不是使个人受益的良好习惯,是否认同?
作家立场:保持健康是个人对于社会的责任,保持健康也是使个人受益的良好习惯。
解析:保持健康为何尽到了社会责任:减少了社会医疗资源的消耗;个人保持健康,可以精力充沛地应对事业的挑战,因此,创造更多的社会财富。这就是尽到社会责任的体现。
[教育类]:
Schools should only offer subjects that are beneficial to students’ futurecareer success. Other subjects, such as music and sports, are not important. Towhat extent do you agree or disagree? 学校应该提供有助于学生事业成功的课程,音乐课和体育课不重要,是否认同?
作家立场:支持学校开设文体课程,因为这是帮助学生实习全面发展。
[社会类]:
In many countries more and more young people are leaving but unable to findjobs. What problems do you think youth unemployment will bring for individualand the society? What measures should be taken to deduce level of unemploymentamong youngsters? 在很多国家,年轻人离开校园,不能找到工作,这对于个人和社会有哪些影响?如何解决大学生择业难的问题?
点评:本文讨论的是学生择业难的影响和解决策略,不是原因和解决策略。
[交通能源类]:
Some people believe that air travel should be prohibited as it causespollution and uses up fuel resources. Do you agree or disagree with thestatement? You should use your own experience to support your argument.有人认为飞机旅行污染空气,消耗油料,应该被限制,是否认同?
点评:我们不能因噎废食,这是矫枉过正,因此,不能限制飞机旅行。
[犯罪类]:
Research suggests that majority of criminals who send to prison wouldcommit crimes when set free, what do you think of this case? What can be done tosolve this problem? 大多数犯罪分子,释放以后,会重复犯罪,原因何在,如何解决?
点评:2015年已经两次考察少年犯罪,但是,犯罪话题的最核心的母题在于惯性犯罪的原因和解决策略。犯罪类是社会类重点分支角度,本题依然重点备考。
[电视类]:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television hasdestroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your opinion. 电视破坏了家庭和朋友间的交流,是否认同?
点评:本题练习如何完善让步反驳的写法:三分让步,七分反驳。即是:原题的观点有一定的合理性,但是,我不认同?
解析:除了看电视,其他影响人际关系的元素:科技产品对人们精力的分散,现代工作压力和激烈竞争对于人际关系的影响;空间的隔离(外地工作,学习等)
补丁题5题:(时间充裕;建议准备)
[教育类]:
Some people think that all school students should learn a foreign language.Others think that a student should not be required to learn a foreign languageif he or she does not have the talent for it. Discuss both these views and giveyour own opinion. 有人认为所有的学生都应该被要求学习外语,有人认为,没有天赋的孩子不必学习外语,讨论两种观点,给出你的意见?
[建筑类]:
Many old buildings are protected by the law because they are part of anation's history. However, some people think they should be knocked down to makeway for new ones because people need houses and offices. Do you agree ordisagree? 很多古老建筑被法律保护,但是很多人认为老建筑应该被拆除给新建筑让路,是否同意这个观点?
[电视类]:
A study shows that a lot of children, from the age 7 to 11, spend too muchtime watching television or playing video games. How do you think this probleminfluence the children, their families and the society? What measures should betaken to solve it? 研究显示,7岁到11岁的年轻人花费太多时间看电视,玩游戏,这对于孩子,家庭和社会的影响何在?应该如何解决?
[交通能源类]:
The best way to solve the environmental problems is to increase the priceof fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 增加油料的价格是解决环境污染的最佳途径?
[动物类]:
Some people think it is necessary to use animals for testing medicinesintended for human use. Others, however, think it is not right to do that.Discuss both of these views and give you own opinion.有人认为小动物实验对于人类有益,有认为人们没有权利用动物实验,讨论两种观点,给出你的意见?
作者介绍:
薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥),新东方网专栏作家,高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》,每年创作20万字原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作7.5分,托福写作29分)。
爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。
大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。
对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。
教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)
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