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2015年5月9日雅思写作解析及语料库_雅思阅读评分标准

2015-12-16 09:58

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作者:薛鹏

>>>2015年5月9日雅思考试试题回忆及解析

2015年5月9日雅思写作解析及语料库

环保类:

Development in technology leads to environmental problems and some peoplethink that the solution to these problems is for everyone to lead a simpler wayof life, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss bothviews and give your own opinion. 高科技发展导致环境污染,保护环境是要人们过简单生活还是依赖科技?

作家立场:环保即要依赖高科技,还应该提倡人们过简单生活。

雅思小鹏哥原创环保语料库:

环保话题基本表达法:

1. environmental protection = environmental preservation = environmentalconservation = greenism n环境保护

解析:greenism n. 绿色保护;环境保护

2. environmentally friendly = eco-friendly adj 环保的……

3. environmental protection awareness n环保意识

4. ruin / damage / hurt the environment v破坏环境

5. raise / enhance / boost environmental protection awareness amongst thegeneral public v 提高全民环保意识

词汇:amongst the general public 在公众之间

6. environmental pollution = environmental contamination 环境污染

环境恶化的危害和原因分析:

1. traffic congestion = traffic jam n交通拥堵

2. over-industrialization n过度工业化

3. deforestation n 森林砍伐

4. air and noise contamination / pollution n 空气和噪音污染

5. the deterioration of air quality n 日益恶化的空气质量

词汇:deteriorate v 使得恶化

6. threaten public health and safety v威胁公共健康与安全

环境污染解决途径:

1. to utilize the natural resources properly v合理利用自然资源

2. adopt environmentally friendly policy v采取环保政策

3. exploit and popularize the use of eco-friendly power source v研发和推广环保能源

词汇:exploit v开发;利用;剥削

4. Carrying out environmental publicity and education to enhance the wholenation's awareness of the environment. 开展环境宣传教育,提高全民族的环境意识

5. To produce and popularize low-carbon and eco-friendly vehicles aiming toreduce contamination caused by the emission of exhaust gas.生产和普及环保汽车,减少由于尾气释放带来的污染。

雅思小鹏哥原创范文赏析:

首段:背景介绍 +争议焦点+作家立场

Ironically, we, human beings, are now facing with a series ofenvironment-related issues such as global warming or the depletion of resources.People differ greatly in their views as to how to protect the environment, toresort to the high-tech or to opt for a simpler lifestyle. To voice my opinion,the perfect combination of the two approaches will be the ideal way to resolveenvironment-related problems.

二段:我的口吻支持正方观点:雅思阅读评分标准

Indeed, plenty of evidence could be explored to justify that it works tosafeguard our surroundings via high-tech. First, efforts should be made toexplore and popularize new environmentally friendly energy sources to substitutethose highly polluted fossil fuels. To illustrate, it is highly recommended toproduce and popularize low-carbon and eco-friendly vehicles aiming to reducecontamination caused by the emission of exhaust gas. The use of fuel-cell-drivencars will pose less threat to the environment. Also, natural resources such assolar energy, sea energy, wind energy and tidal power could and should beapplied to our normal life and production. Eventually, the effective recycle ofresources could be realized if we can rely on the high-tech to classify andhandle various rubbishes.

三段:我的口吻支持反方观点:

Yet, in addition to relying on high-tech, it is still feasible to call onpeople to live a simple and eco-friendly life. First, environmental pollutionwill be eased if less high-tech products are utilized in our life. For example,the public should be advocated to avoid driving private cars and take publictransit, in this sense, it will diminish the waste of natural resources andminimize the use of fossil fuels. Further, people’s environmental protectionawareness should be strengthened. To foster water-wise lifestyle, to economizeelectricity and to diminish the use of plastic bags could all serve as perfectexamples. Last, people can also be encouraged to visit the beautiful places thatare close to home, rather than traveling for long distance on holidays.

尾段:再次亮明观点:

Overall, I re-affirm my conviction that both living a simple life andrelying on high-tech could play an indispensable part in the process ofenvironmental preservation. Therefore, the combination of both methods is highlyrecommended.

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      作者介绍:

薛鹏(@雅思小鹏哥), 高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》,每年创作20万字原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作7.5分,托福写作29分)。

爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。

大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。

对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。

教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)

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