雅思大作文引言段怎么写_雅思考试报名官网
2016-01-04 11:12
来源:新东方网整理
作者:
在雅思的引言段中,一般会包括以下三个要素:
一: 对于题目中提出的论述/问题的重述(restatement of the issue)
二: 对于该论述/问题,表明自己的观点(your opinion of the issue)
三: 对于文章的主体段落布局的预先交代(layout of the main body)雅思考试报名官网
其中,要素一和要素二是必要组成部分,而要素三是可选择的组成部分,如果有的话,会使文章看上去条理更清晰,层次更分明。
我们来看下面的例子:
We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used inbusinesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes.
What things will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence oncomputers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?
这是一篇谈论我们对计算机的依赖性的议论文,主要问题针对的是:这种依赖性是一件好事还是我们应对它感到怀疑?下面我们来看这个引言段的范例:
Although no one can deny the fact that computers are transforming our worldand our lives in an astonishing way and that we rely on them for our dailyexistence. We should be aware of their potentially damaging impacts on manyaspects of our social life and remain skeptical of the over-computerization ofour world which is ardently advocated by some scientists. In my opinion,computers may jeopardize the overall wellbeing of humans in three fundamentalways if we misuse them.
该引言段很好地包含了以上提到的三个要素,现将该段按三要素分解并分析如下:
要素一 重述: Although no one can deny the fact that computers are transformingour world and our lives in an astonishing way and that we rely on them for ourdaily existence.
分析:以although开头的让步状语从句来进行重述,说明计算机正在急剧地改变着我们的世界以及我们对计算机的日常依赖。注意句型的运用:althoughno one can deny the fact that….. and that…..
要素二 观点:We should be aware of their potentially damaging impacts on manyaspects of our social life and remain skeptical of the over-computerization ofour world which is ardently advocated by some scientists.
分析:用We should be aware of。。。and remain skepticalof。。。这样的经典词组来表达作者对计算机潜在破坏作用的情醒认识以及对日益计算机化的世界的怀疑。
要素三 布局: In my opinion, computers may jeopardize the overall wellbeing ofhumans in three fundamental ways if we misuse them.
分析:用。。。in three fundamentalways来说明如果我们滥用计算机的话,它将对人类的整体福祉造成三个根本性的危害作用。这样的写法就为下文的主体段落作好了铺垫,即主体段应分为三个小段落,每段分别谈论其中一个危害之处。
新东方重庆学校微信(微信号:xdf_cq)
最新考试资讯、教育新闻,请扫一扫二维码,关注我们的官方微信!
版权及免责声明
①凡本网注明"稿件来源:新东方"的所有文字、图片和音视频稿件,版权均属新东方教育科技集团(含本网和新东方网) 所有,任何媒体、网站或个人未经本网协议授权不得转载、链接、转贴或以其他任何方式复制、发表。已经本网协议授权的媒体、网站,在下载使用时必须注明"稿件来源:新东方",违者本网将依法追究法律责任。
② 本网未注明"稿件来源:新东方"的文/图等稿件均为转载稿,本网转载仅基于传递更多信息之目的,并不意味着赞同转载稿的观点或证实其内容的真实性。如其他媒体、网站或个人从本网下载使用,必须保留本网注明的"稿件来源",并自负版权等法律责任。如擅自篡改为"稿件来源:新东方",本网将依法追究法律责任。
③ 如本网转载稿涉及版权等问题,请作者见稿后在两周内速来电与新东方网联系,电话:010-60908555。