写作想要得到理想的分数，除了要具备大作文的写作实力之外，小作文当然也不容忽视，尤其是在小作文相对容易得分的情况下。要想答好小作文，以下四点需做到：1.信息全面2.逻辑清晰3.词句准确4.表达多样。信息量和逻辑结构主要通过审题确定。而词句准确性主要是积累固定表达。这些都是比较容易掌握的。但是表达多样绝对不是那么容易就驾驭的哦!尽管如此，方法总会比问题多!

一下是剑4满分的考官范文中所有的主语：

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The table gives a breakdown of the different types of family who wereliving in poverty in Australia in 1999.

On average, 11% of all households(百分数), comprising almost two millionpeople, were in this position. However, those(代词) consisting of only one parentor a single adult had almost double this proportion of poor people, with 21% and19% respectively.

Couples(名词) generally tended to be better off, with lower poverty levelsfor couples without children (7%) than those with children (12%). It isnoticeable that for both types of household with children, a higher than averageproportion(比重) were living in poverty at this time.

Older people(名词) were generally less likely to be poor, though once againthe trend favoured elderly couples (only 4%) rather than single elderly people(6%).

Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those withchildren were more likely to be living in poverty than those consisting ofcouples.雅思官网报名

总结起来那些变来变去的主语无非就是：百分数，代词，名词，比重(或趋势)。那么请根据这个结论，自己试着写写下面表格中的数据，暂时忽略逻辑问题，只关注主语变化问题。

(1)百分数——In Europe, 9.8% of land was degraded by deforestation, comprisingthe largest proportion among the three regions.

(2)比重——In contrast, a much smaller proportion of this reason causing 1.7%land to degrade in Oceania.

(3)名词——Overgrazing in Oceania was the most dominant cause of landdegradation, with 11.3%.

(4)名词——North America suffered more from over-cultivation, consisting of3.3% out of 5%.

(5)代词——Total land degradation in Europe was as much as 23% while that ofOceania followed behind with 13% and the least part (比重)was taken by America(accounting for only 5% altogether).

是不是已经能够更灵活地完成小作文了呢?别说做不到，也许只是练习量没达到。加油鸭鸭!

作者简介：

陈思佳老师

陈思佳：吉林新东方国外部写作组教研负责人，雅思写作教龄3.5年。擅长分析解读官方材料、挖掘知识落地方法、诊断学生问题和提出解决办法。