各位托福考友好，新东方波波老师第一时间为各位奉上2015年7月4日托福考试独立和综合写作的范文，希望能给大家一些参考。更多新东方托福写作范文尽在新东方网托福写作频道。2015年7月4日托福考试其他科目的解析请参考》》》2015年7月4日托福考试试题回忆及答案解析(汇总)

7月4日托福写作试题回忆之独立写作

原题如下：

Children will benefit in important ways to take care of pet animals.

范文如下：

According to a survey conducted by China Daily, it becomes a commonphenomenon that with the gradually raised living standard of the public,nowadays an increasing number of families raise pet animals, which hasdramatically attracted public attention. But when it comes to whether parentsshould allow children look after pets, people varying in personlities and ageshold different views. As far as I am concerned, it is beneficial for children totake care of pets, in orde to establish close friendship with pet animals andfoster kids’ sense of responsibility.

To begin with, via spending long time staying with pets, children candevelop close relationship with their pets. It is self-evident that the longeryou stay with animals, the closer and deeper relationship will be established.Such an experience will enrich kids’ childhood and become beautiful memorieschildren shall cherish for life. I still remember my first pet dog Steve. Backthat time most desirable thing for me after school was to take Steve out to thenearby park, where we had so much fun chasing each other. Steve would alwayswave his tail whenever I came near and fed him. Without Steve my boyhood wouldhave been so much duller. Therefore, raising pets can help children to build upa close relationship with them and thus harvest a colorful childhood.

Secondly, taking good care of pets is an effective way for children tofoster the sense of responsibilty and great patience, which are of greatsignificance for their future success. When parents allow children to raisepets, they become the host of their pets and thus they are obliged to doeverything to ensure the health and well-being of their cats or dogs. Forexample, children have to prepare nutritious food and clean the living placesfor pets, which are sometimes boring and time-consuming. The difficulties andtroubles accompanying the process of raising pets cannot be overcome withoutpatience and the sense of responsbility.

Admittedly, there are a few disadvantages of looking after pets such asoccupying children’s study time and making kids’ room become dirty. However,compared with the above reasons of our claim, these demerits can be neglected.Therefore, I strongly agree with the belief that it is conducive for kids totake care of pets, for they can not only develop close relationship with theirpets, but also learn to undertake responsibilty as well as become patient infront of challenges.

7月4日托福写作试题回忆之综合写作

The reading passage proposes 3 possbile functions of brochs. The professor,by contrast, questions all the 3 proposals.托福拼分

First, contrary to the belief in the reading that the broches are used fordefending enemies, the professor claims that they are not designed for thispurpose, because there are no windows. If the brochs are for defense, windowsare necessay for shooting arrows to keep invaders at distance.

Second, the reading contends that the brochs are for food storage. However,the professor says that water tanks and fireplaces are identified inside thebroch. For one thing, water tanks will increase moisture, which leads to rottingof grains. For another, fireplaces would produce ashes that could set grains onfire.

Third, the writer of the passage claims that the brochs are designed ashouses for high-ranking leaders. However, the professor challenges the ideas ofthe reading by citing that the brochs are isolated far away from otherresidents. The fact is that high-ranking leaders are supposed to live close toother group members for better management.

作者介绍

赵波，英语语言学硕士，七年专业英语学习，深谙中英文思维和表达差异，了解中国学生在写作中存在的问题。英语专业八级，高分托福成绩, 阅读30分。热爱英语教学，授课风格儒雅温和又不失幽默，亲和力强，让学生能够快乐学习，轻松跨越考试。