托福写作范文:交聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友更好_托福和雅思的区别
2015-10-08 09:33
来源:新东方北京学校
作者:杨扬
托福写作题目
Do you agree ordisagree with the following statement:
It's better to make friends with intelligent people than with people whohave a good sense of humor?
解析:
这道题目是一道对比类的题目,这种题目在考试中占有很大的比例,也希望各位考生在今后的备考中多多注意这类题型。两者对比类的题目在寻找思路时,一般从利弊角度来考虑,选择a的话,寻找a的好处,或者b的弊端。这道题目就是在问应该交更聪明的朋友还是幽默的朋友。
同意和不同意都可以写,比如认为应该交智商高的朋友,我们可以写聪明的带给我们的好处:向他们学习珍贵的品质,有助于我们成功;聪明的朋友总能帮助我们渡过难关:然后写让步段,尽管幽默的朋友能逗我们笑,让我们快乐,但是聪明的朋友更能够理性地安慰我们,帮助我们真正摆脱不良情绪。
具体文章结构安排:
中心论点:交聪明的朋友比幽默的朋友更好
1. 向他们学习珍贵的品质,有助于我们成功
举例论证,并列例子的方法证明分论点
2. 聪明的朋友总能帮助我们渡过难关
因果论证的段内展开结构托福和雅思的区别
3. 尽管幽默的朋友能逗我们笑,让我们快乐,但是聪明的朋友更能够理性地安慰我们,帮助我们真正摆脱不良情绪
让步转折的段落展开结构
托福写作范文:
Friendsare those who have confidence in you and offer assistance toyouunconditionally; they are always there no matter what happens. On apracticallevel, friends benefit us in many ways due to the valuablecharacteristics thatthey are in possession of. Then which characteristic of afriend is moreattractive, being intelligent or humorous? From my perspective, Iattach greater importance to intelligence of friends than the sense ofhumor.
Makingfriends with intelligent people affords us the opportunity toachieveself-improvement. There is no denying that ingenious people mustpossesscertain significant characteristics making them stand out among thepeers. By makingfriends with them, we are more likely to be positivelyinfluenced by them andobtain the important quality and effective methods in dealwith problems weconfront in our life, thus increasing the possibility offulfilling our goals.For example, playing with those who are able to managetheir time efficientlyhelps us foster the ability to plan and organize. Also,talking with a personwho enjoys favorable social relationship contributes to thecultivation of ourexcellent communicating skills. What’s more, learning about afriend whosucceeds in realizing his dream through hard work motivates us to setapractical goal and work toward it continuously. Therefore we tend to acquireamyriad of wholesome characteristics by building friendship with intelligentpeople.
Ona more practical level, we have a better chance to come up withcreativesolutions to the problems we are faced with in our life with the helpofingenious friends. It is not uncommon that we have to meet a multitudeofproblems or get in trouble that we may find difficult to resolve. However,intelligentfriends, being analytical and insightful, never fail to offer adviceandguidance that are of great help in overcoming these difficulties. Chancesarethat friends with intelligence help us analyze the situation in an efficientway,correct the mistakes we have made in seeking for solutions and predicttheresults that our decisions may yield to ensure our successful goingthroughhard times. Thanks to the wisdom and level-headedness of intelligentfriends wehave, there is no need for us to worry about the difficulties we maybeconfronted with either in our study or work.
Admittedly,friends with a good sense of humor could bring us jokes and joyand make ourlife full of happiness. We may have fun when staying along withhumorousfriends. Nevertheless, at times of sorrow, it is ingenious friends whosurprisinglymanage to drive off our loneliness and sadness due to the fact thatthey areable to comfort us in a comparatively rational way rather than just makeus laugh and forget about the adversity.
Hence,it is more desirable to have intelligent friends than friends with agood senseof humor. Not only can ingenious friends provide assistance thatcontributes toy our success and that makes it possible for you to overcomedifficulties, butalso they could better satisfy your psychological needs whenyou are in badmood than humorous friends do.
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