托福独立写作范文解析_托福必备词汇
2016-02-24 16:42
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Do you agree or disagree:All university students should be required to takebasic science courses even if they are not in the career goal.
题型分类:绝对题+应不应该题
论证角度:利弊分析
观点选择:让步
开头:同意所有的大学生都应该学学基础的科学课。(话题引入+他人观点+明确立场+过渡)
In general, all university courses can be divided into two kinds: liberalarts and science, which both serve as an impetus to the development of society.Lately, an interesting discussion has arisen about whether all universitystudents should be required to take basic science courses even if they are notin the career goal. From my perspective, I am a big fan of science and I fullyadvocate that basic science courses are a necessity for every universitystudent. My reasons and examples are as follows. (86 words)
中间段1:科学是社会发展的第一推动力,学理科的学生学基础科学课可以打好基础,学文科的学生有基础科学知识今后更有优势。(主题句+说理论证+细节例子)
Firstly, it is no denying that science is the primary productive force.From the past to present, numerous cases have proved that our world’s rapiddevelopment is based on the remarkable progress of science and technology.University students, whatever their majors are, will benefit a lot from thebasic science courses they have taken. Students of science can certainly enhancetheir foundation of scientific knowledge and those who study liberal arts willbe advantageous in job market if they also have a basic understanding ofscience. In modern society, almost all individuals who change the world havebeen under the influence of science and technology in university, such as Stevejobs, Zuckerberg and Jack Ma. (115 words)
中间段2:在基础科学课上所培养的逻辑思维、实验精神对今后工作有重要的影响。(主题句+说理论证+细节例子)
Besides, what students learned in basic science courses will exert positiveinfluence on their future careers. These valuable assets they can amass inscience courses are logical thinking, analytical skills, the spirit to questionauthority and the emphasis on experiments. In fact, these qualities are anessential guarantee of high working efficiency, whatever the work is. Look atthis counter example. If one has never been exposed to any science courses, hemust lack the awareness of doing experiments. Thus, in the work, he is likely toput any idea he thinks of into practice without testing its feasibility, whichwill obviously bring harms to his work. (107 words)
让步段:诚然,题目中的说法确实显得有些绝对,因为有一部分文科学生,学习能力差,本专业课还没有学到家的,强硬让他们学习科学课,是不合适的。但可以加适量的基础科学课到教学计划中。(承认漏洞+堵漏)
Admittedly, the statement that all students should be required to studybasic science courses appears arbitrary and unilateral, because it is notappropriate to make basic science courses mandatory for some liberal-artsstudents who even have difficulties in their own majors. However, in light ofthe significance of scientific literacy, school authorities can add a propernumber of basic science courses into the teaching schedule and make themoptional for those weak in study. (74)
结尾:重申观点+归纳理由/升华主题
In conclusion, basic science courses are the foundation of anyone who wantsto survive in this highly competitive modern world. If you do not want to regretin the future, seize the present and participate in some basic science coursesin university because you never know something you have learnt in the coursewill be a great helper to your future career. (62 words)托福必备词汇
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