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托福写作中的七大语法规范_新托福满分

2016-07-21 10:22

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关于托福写作相信大家都买了不少参考书,并且背诵了不少好段子,但是有的考生依旧托福写作成绩不理想,究其原因在写作时可能不太在意,小编带大家看看让我们看看托福写作中的语法规范。

语法规范

1. 不完整的句子

(1) If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard. One of the hardest things that people do.

If you find that writing is hard is because it is hard—one of the hardest things that people do.

(2) Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world. A gossip that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world, a gossip that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

Stereotypes are a kind of gossip about the world that makes us prejudge people before we ever lay eyes on them.

2. 分词短语作状语的错误

Holding her in his arms, the moon hid behind the cloud.

As soon as the moon hid behind the cloud, he held her in his arms.

3. 修饰词错位

(1) Romeo received word that Juliet was dead from another messenger.

Romeo received word from another messenger that Juliet was dead.

(2) After leaving the stage, the audience’s applause called the musicians back for an encore.

After the musicians left the stage, the audience’s applause called them back for an encore.

(3) Disruptive in the classroom, a teacher may become exasperated with hyperactive children.

Disruptive in the classroom, hyperactive children may exasperate a teacher.

4. 串句

Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization, for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance, but when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers.

Unproductive or uncooperative workers can seriously harm an organization; for this reason, employers need to have accurate information about employee performance. But when employees have full access to their own personnel files, co-workers and even supervisors will often find it difficult to give frank criticism of underachievers or to report troublemakers.

5. 时态错误

The researchers admitted that they falsified crucial data in the study.

The researchers admitted that they had falsified crucial data in the study.

6. 代词错误

(1) Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take it our on others.

Too often people either keep their feelings to themselves or take them our on others.

(2) Each girl and boy must do their part to keep the home fires burning.

Each girl and boy must do her or his part to keep the home fires burning.

(3) This college has their own entrance requirements.

This college has its own entrance requirements.

(4) If one wishes to participate in the political process, you can begin by voting regularly.

If one wishes to participate in the political process, one can begin by voting regularly.

(5) The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, they thought an unhappy employee might have started it.新托福满分

The fire in the library was finally put out. For a while, the library staff thought an unhappy employee might have started it.

7. 结构混乱

Because Hemingway’s style is simple makes his writing accessible to all readers.

Because Hemingway’s style is simple, his writing is accessible to all readers.

Hemingway’s simple style makes his writing accessible to all readers.

以上就是小编推荐的托福写作中的7大语法规范。一篇好的文章是由一个个句子堆砌起来的,每一句话都是这篇文章的重点我们万万不可忽视,在这里面不仅仅体现了考生的语法用词,还能体现考生对于题目的思路看法。最后,小编祝大家在托福考试中考出好成绩。



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