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手把手教低龄学生仿写(1):如何写好托福独立写作_toefl

2016-08-01 10:59

来源:新东方北京学校

作者:美高项目 陈琳

很多初中小朋友都抱怨写不好托福写作,一是觉得思路不够开阔,二是不懂得文章如何展开,不用愁,我们下面用TPO2的一篇独立题目教大家如何正确身体、展开思路,并充分展开例子。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in anyrelationship between people.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

此类题目即是托福写作特殊类考题之一:极端词汇题。此类题目通常建议大家采取不同意的立场。展开的部分可以考虑“否定主题——给出原因——其他情况”这样一个过程。另外提醒考生,在考试中如遇到自己不太擅长的题目导致分论点只能想出两点也不要慌张,因为传统的5段式固然好,但是有着很好展开,很好逻辑及语言的4段式依然可以帮助我们拿到高分甚至满分。本篇范文即为4段式写法,开头通过引用名言否定主题,展开部分先给出其他情况,随即深入表明否定主题的原因并举出名人例子。希望这篇范文可以对大家有所帮助。

They say “honesty is the only thing worth having in this world, yet itsells for so little”. This, I deem, best illustrates the point whether alwaysbeing honest is of paramount importance in any relationship. It goes withoutsaying that honesty should be highly valued in our daily life, but to carry thepractice too far as to embrace all our social encounters would be a far-fetchedone. My reasons are listed below.

To begin with, there are circumstances when telling white lies would begreatly appreciated. That one relative thrown into deep despair with terminallung cancer would be enormously cheered up by the knowledge that the diagnosiswas “just tuberculosis”. A friend who suffers from recurring failure in businesswould manage to summon up the courage to start from scratch knowing that“success is waiting at the end of every journey”. A little girl born withphysical challenge must perceive the world from the bright side if what she wastold was “heaven favors those who went through extreme sufferings.” All of thesecases of “dishonesty” play an indispensible role in our everyday dealings withpeople, without which the whole world would be filled with countless downtroddenspirits.

To further illustrate, utter honesty can, and in many cases, lead to ourdownfall. History is replete with such examples. Consider, for example, EdwardSnowden, the former American CIA contractor. In June, 2013, gnawed by a guiltyconscience, and urged by the maxim of telling the truth, he was finally able toreveal to the world that the American government was surveilling not only on itsallies but also on the rest of the world. Snowden soon came under internationalattention after the revelation, which was followed by angry charges by theAmerican government on accounts of treason and theft of confidential governmentinformation. As a result, he flew to Moscow, Russia, leaving behind him a worldof indignant people, astonished and petrified, and remained nowhere to be foundtill now. Thus, total honesty can sometimes serve us wrong.toefl

From what has been discussed above, we can easily reach the conclusion thathonesty is a great virtue, but it should be carried out with certain caveats andthere are times when little white lies are just what needed to spice up ourlife.

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