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手把手教低龄学生仿写(2):如何写好托福独立写作_新托福考试官方指南

2016-08-05 16:44

来源:新东方北京学校

作者:美高项目 陈琳

很多初中小朋友都抱怨写不好托福写作,一是觉得思路不够开阔,二是不懂得文章如何展开,不用愁,我们下面用TPO6的一篇独立题目教大家如何正确身体、展开思路,并充分展开例子。

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when yourgrandparents were children.

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

此类题目即是托福写作特殊类考题之一:古今对比题。此类题目建议考生要双方对比展开,不要顾此失彼,只谈一方不谈另一方。另外提醒考生,考试中如遇到一些较抽象的考题时,分论点的提取可以考虑分领域,分群体。本文采用4段式写法,以当今生活中人们面对的竞争压力为主线,分论点分别从学生以及当代上班族两个不同群体展开,展开部分对过去与现在都有提及。希望可以对考生有所帮助。

From my early childhood, my grandparents has been telling me stories abouthow ravaging the Japanese invasion of Northeast China was, how countlessinnocent people was murdered and maimed in the Nanking Massacre and how thethree-year natural disaster left people hunting barks for food. Life in thewartime was a torture indeed. However, to state that people today lead an easierliving would be unfair since people today, from all walks of life, are agonizedby the 24/7 rat race and are therefore rendered no less miserable than it was inthe past.新托福考试官方指南

To begin with, consider children. In the past, for children aged from fiveto seven, they usually abandon themselves in the neighborhood playground. Butnow, in order for them to gain a competitive edge over their peers, pre-schooleducation such as piano lessons and art classes are the norm. Take my nephew asan example. From the age of 4, he has been taking calligraphy lessons, and keepspracticing it for three years in a row. With a schoolbag fully packed, he wouldset out for what he described the “most boring class” he has ever had.Sometimes, he would splash the ink all over the wall just to let out hisdistress, but of course, to no avail, and he has to keep practicing it if hedidn’t want to lag behind. As a result, from an early age, children weredeprived of the chances of doing something that truly appeals to him because ofthe fierce competition.

Secondly, the dire condition is even more manifest when it comes to theworking adults. Take college professors as an example, compared with what’s inthe past when all they have to do was to lecture well, college professors todayhave to face the pressure of “publish or perish”, in which a professor isstrictly required to produce quality dissertations in order to get tenure, orelse he or she will be forced to switch to other schools that are below thecurrent level. Moreover, one needs to look no further than clinical doctors.Today, their performance is closely related to drug sales as opposed to what’sin the past when all they have to do was to take good care of a patient.Therefore, working adults are driven fanatically by professional demands as muchas it was in the past.

From what has been discussed above, we can easily come to the conclusionthat life today is definitely no more comfortable than it was when ourgrandparents were children.

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