2015年9月5日托福独立写作：If a city wants to attract more tourists, the governmentshould improve the safety by hiring more polices or repairing old buildings.Which one do you prefer?

魔君这里分析的是选择通过修理保护老房子来吸引游客的观点。这一道题目也与机经中反复出现的一道题目有相通之处：Do you agree ordisagree: preserving the old buildings is more important than building newhouses.托福考场

那么具体展开思路可以采用拆分的方法：

1.一方面对于普通游客来说，老房子的修缮能够使得他们能够感受体会到历史所发生的事情。具体举例可以分析中国北京的故宫，颐和园，圆明园等地方，描绘这些历史建筑所设计的用途分别是什么，以及这些地方所能发生的一些事情。

2. 另一方面对于一些非普通游客来说，如艺术家，建筑师等，老房子的修缮和保护能够让他们更真实的接触到这些文化遗产，给他们的工作带来灵感。

那么下面魔君就带大家来看一篇关于云南的一个被列为文化遗产的小村庄，顺便欣赏下这美丽的风景哦～

Yunnan village protected in a time capsule

Tuanshan village, built during the Qing Dynasty (1644-1911), is regarded asthe gems of Chinese folk houses. The architectural styles of the 19th centuryand beyond remain intact and villagers' ways are well-preserved. [Photo providedto chinadaily.com.cn]

Situated 13 kilometers to the west of Jianshui town in Southwest China'sYunnan province, Tuanshan is inhabited by both ethnic Yi and Han Chinese peoplewith about 80 percent of families having the surname "Zhang". The Zhang familymigrated as merchants to the area from East China's Jiangxi province in theearly Ming Dynasty and later prospered after settling at Tuanshan. [Photoprovided to chinadaily.com.cn]

A national-level protected cultural relic named "Huang'en Mansion", builtin 1909. Most structures in Tuanshan are two-storey compounds with housessurrounding courtyards facing east, featuring black tile roofs, pointed eavesand whitewashed outer walls. [Photo by Jiamu Wan/Provided tochinadaily.com.cn]

A building named "Family Zhang's Garden", built in 1905, is anothernational-level protected cultural relic. There are more than 26 well-preservedresidences combining Han Chinese and Yi ethnic styles in the village. In 2006,Tuanshan was inscribed on the list of "100 Protected Memorial ArchitecturalHeritages" by the World Cultural Heritage Fund. [Photo by Jiamu Wan/Provided tochinadaily.com.cn]

Exquisite ornamental wood, brick and stone carvings on residentialbuildings in Tuanshan. The decorations are normally inscribed or painted withtraditional poetry, opera, calligraphy or colored paintings which reflect theZhang family's cultural pursuits and its wealth. [Photo by Jiamu Wan &Theodor Pokorny/Provided to chinadaily.com.cn]

A flagstone alleyway in Tuanshan. Residential buildings feature gray tilesand light yellow walls, giving people a feeling of simplicity and warmth. [Photoby Jiamu Wan/Provided to chinadaily.com.cn]

The Bishi Railway, sponsored by the Zhang family in 1912, was completed in1936. It passed through Jijie Street in Tuanshan to Shipingduan and was thefirst privately operated railway in China. [Photo by Jiamu Wan/Provided tochinadaily.com.cn]

Rush cushions, made from straw, are examples of traditional craftsmanshipin Tuanshan. For local villagers, this is not only a way to create economicbenefit, but also help establish a cultural identity of their own. [Photo byJiamu Wan/Provided to chinadaily.com.cn]

Cultural and creative products of Tuanshan, such as a T-shirt featuring aTuanshan logo. [Photo by Theodor Pokorny/Provided to chinadaily.com.cn]

看完了如此唯美的一组图片，我们完全可以汲取其中的一部分内容来填充我们的文章啦。下面是段落示范部分：

To be followed, repairing the historical buildings can generate enormousbenefits for the extraordinary like the artists, architects. To be specific,because of the richness of Chinese culture that has precipitated in the form ofresidential architects, folk houses have become a popular subject that manytraditional artists such as the painter or photographer try to express and manyarchitects attempt to research. Take Tuanshan village in Yunnan that has beenregarded as the gems of Chinese folk houses as an example.

 In the small village,there is a national-level protected cultural relic named "Huang'en Mansion",built in 1909. Most structures in Tuanshan are two-storey compounds with housessurrounding courtyards facing east, featuring black tile roofs, pointed eavesand whitewashed outer walls. After appreciating the mansion, the architect cangain an access to the unique architectural style occurring a hundred years ago,which may lead to the combination of Chinese traditional culture into the modernbuildings. Besides, the painters may be inspired to accomplish an exquisitepainting that contains the profound Chinese cultural significance. Accordingly,the benefits of repairing and preserving old constructions can be perceived forthe extraordinary people.

教师简介： 周徐敏，北京新东方托福本科直通车托福及ACT写作名师，善于颠覆和重新架构学生写作思维。

从事托福考试培训多年，教授课程涵盖基础、强化、冲分段，具有丰富的教学经验，教学风格自成一家，其教授的学生从初中到大学研究生包括各个层次的学生，各个年龄段的学生，能够非常准确的把握学生们的问题所在，并帮助学生们去逐一解决对应的问题。 善于营造一个轻松和谐的学习氛围，在课堂上以幽默风趣却又专业性权威性极强的形象打动每一位学生，提高学生们的学习热情，激起学生们的学习欲望。课后也能够非常负责的给每一位学生提供帮助，和学生们做到亦师亦友，从业多年中，一直深受学生爱戴追捧。

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