“老师我实在不知道这个分论点咋举例啊啊啊啊所以就写不出干货车轱辘话来回转啊啊啊”

这个是很多人对于托福独立写作的一大怨念。实在不好意思老写隔壁的小明小钢小红或者Jack, David, Jessica,总觉得来点名人事迹逼格更高嘛。

说到名人事迹，好吧，盖茨乔布斯莫扎特马丁路德金爱迪生...华盛顿的樱桃树(假的)，牛顿的小苹果...咱不嫌太sú了么

还有，你用就用吧，记得别把乔布斯写成SteveQiaobusi...另外，用乔布斯当例子，你得知道Macintosh是啥，Graphicalinterface operatingsystem 是啥吧，否则写出来毫无干货。最简单的方法是上Wikipedia找自己喜欢的，人生经历比较丰富的名人，看英文简传。

今天推荐一位不那么sú的名人：IT宅们的祖师爷，二战盟军的大功臣，人工智能理论的教父，以及...Gay界反歧视的代言人——艾伦图灵AlanTuring.

对了，人家其实脸没有《模仿游戏》中的扮演者卷福那么长的：

简单介绍：德艺双馨的数学家，逻辑学家，密码学家，计算机与人工智能科学家，生于1912，剑桥学士，普林斯顿博士，提出现代计算机原型模型基础，通过计算机帮助盟军破解德军核心密码系统，提出图灵测试构建人工智能理论体系，因同性恋获罪被强制注射激素，吃剧毒的咬了一口的苹果而死。

详细介绍：https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alan_Turing

关键词：computer science, cryptanalyst, algorithm, Turing machine, Turing test,artificial intelligence, Hut 8 of Government Code and Cypher School, Enigmamachine, homosexuality, oestrogeninjection, cyanide poisoning.

学以致用部分：输入了好素材，就要输出进机经啦

题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: To succeed in the future, making challenging plans is better than practicalplans.

总论点：Yes

分论点：Challenging plans provide different angle of view and innovativeperspective to cope with the puzzle.

举例部分：History abounds with such examples. During the Second World War, thearmy of Britain was greatly troubled by the Enigma machine which was used byNazi Germany to encipher their communication. While other cryptanalystsendeavored to decipher it manually, Alan Turing, also known as the father oftheoretical computer science andartificial intelligence, decided to tackle itdepending on the algorithm of machines, which had never been done before. Thiswas a challenging decision for sure, but the result proved its rationality: Hismachine worked, making sizable contribution to the triumph of the Ally.

题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People now live a happier life than people in the past

总论点：Yes

分论点：The continuous increase in social equality and inclusiveness has madeour life more enjoyable.

举例部分：Intolerance in the past has faded away, leaving a brighter and moreinclusive society. History witnesses numerous persecution of people withdifferences, among which the experience of Alan Turing is the most convincingone. Despite his unparalleled contribution to the triumphof the Second WorldWar, he was convicted for homosexuality, a crime at that time, and forced tochoose between prison and oestrogeninjection. This kind of prejudice andinjustice will not happen again, with people becoming more ideologicallyadvanced.托福听力笔记

作者介绍：

北京新东方托福写作教师，毕业于香港理工大学笔译与传译硕士专业。多年小班及一对一授课经历，理念是“有用，且有趣”。擅长发现每一位学员的问题并给出对应的解决方案，授课后学员的写作分数或提分经常在四科中最为突出。英文水准过硬，拥有多年兼职交替传译与同声传译经验，曾于联合国亚太经社会与国际数位出版论坛等国际组织与会期间担任同声传译。