相信宅男腐女们对维多利亚秘密的天使不会不熟悉吧～今天要跟大家分享一位老师喜欢的天使!

为人师表，肯定不能跟你们分享维密天使的大尺度照片，所以大家先欣赏一下天使的面孔吧～Candice Swanepoel , 88年生于南非，职业模特

 好吧，也跟你们分享一下走秀和健身的惊艳照片吧～相信不管男生还是女生(直的或者弯的)都会流口水吧～

口水流完了，言归正传，记得今年暑假的机经题目吗?

Celebrities’ opinions are more important to young people than to oldpeople.

对的，你们崇拜也好欣赏也好的偶像们是很喜欢给年轻人建议的，比如上面这位性感美人，就在Vogue杂志上给大家建议了～

The Secret Smoothie Recipe That Keeps Candice Swanepoel Crop Top-Ready

There’s a reason that designers like Michael Kors and Karl Lagerfeld havehandpicked supermodel (and longtime Victoria’s Secret angel) Candice Swanepoelto wear their most body-conscious runway creations—not to mention that KarlieKloss has admitted to having a “girl crush” on the South African stunner. All 69inches of her golden, leggy frame have been sculpted to near perfection throughintensive kickboxing and ModelFit sessions. But Swanepoel specifically creditsher flat-as-a-board stomach to regular yoga classes and oneanti-inflammatory,energy boosting smoothie. Which is to say that when she knowsshe’ll be slipping into a crop top for a day on the beach or a night on the redcarpet, she can be found moving through a vinyasa, then sipping on asupercharged mix of ingredients. Here, she shares her foolproof smoothiemix.

1 frozen banana

1 tsp. protein powder

1 cup blueberries

1 T chia seeds

2 T almond butter

1.5 cups coconut water

1 tsp. spirulina

关键词：

crop top 露腹短上衣 handpick 钦点

foolproof 万无一失的，肯定成功的

anti-inflammatory 抗炎的，消炎的(也是听力词汇)

尽管Candice 给我们的是smoothie recipe，但我们可别当真啊～因为真正的天使是像魔鬼般的训练才有这样的身材的(intensivekickboxing and ModelFit sessions)

那如何把上面一段写到我们的托福作文中呢～

当然还是按照我们上课讲的主题句，解释，例证(对比论证)，细节和总结句这样的结构了。

Young people who are exposed to a lot of celebrity news from media can beeasily influenced in allkinds of facets. Owning to the reason of wanting to beas shining as stars they admire, adolescents often like to take advice from thetop models, popular actors, or fashion icons. For instance, Candice Swanepoel, aprofessional model of Victoria’s Secret, has drawn a lot of attention since2010, when she joined the most famous lingerie brand in the world. Her flawlessbody shape fascinates many young girls and boys, so when she gave a piece ofadvice on Vogue magazine thata secret smoothie recipe and intensive kickboxingcontribute to her sculpted legs and stomach, many young minds, especially girlswere following her suggestions. By contrast, for older and much mature groups,they often neglect the entertainment industry, and care less about the outwardappearance but the virtues valued by tradition. Those reputed personalities,therefore, has more impact on youngsters.

当然一个例子用一个题目太可惜了～

关于健康的题目我们也可以用啊，比如

It is easier to maintain health today than it was in thepast。——选今天把，因为天使可以给建议啊～

当然，要想跟托福君拜拜，还是多听老师的建议吧～多练多写，多修改多反思啦～～

作者简介：

托福课程

张丹纾

北京新东方托福写作教师。毕业于迈阿密大学英语教育专业，研究生学习期间主攻英语写作教学，喜欢用Positive feedback andreinforcement(用积极肯定的回馈和强调学生写作的进步)来激发学生对写作的热情。致力于帮助学生快速提高英语写作的兴趣和能力，突出重点，细致入微，化难为易。