新东方发布：2015年6月四级考试解析

一:写作思路

这是我们拿到的第一套作文题目。属于比较简单的图画题。要求对图画进行描述，并且对父母在孩子成长中的角色进行评论。给三个作文思路：
一.正面：
第一段：图画描述+父母在孩子成长中有很重要的作用
第二段：原因分析
第三段：意义阐述（可适当加建议措施）

二.负面：
第一段：图画描述+父母的过多干涉不利于孩子成长
第二段：原因分析/危害分析
第三段：建议措施

三.中性：
第一段：图画描述+越来越多的父母干涉孩子的选择，对于这一现象不同的人有不同的看法。
第二段：观点阐述（利弊）
第三段：意义阐述/建议措施（表明自己的观点）

参考范文

It can beeasily seen that in thehouse stays a young girl who is holding a paper in herhands while saying thatshe was accepted to the college of her mom’schoice. This thought-provokingcartoon reveals to us that some parents playanincreasingly negative role in their children’s growth.

Generallyspeaking, severalreasons can account for this phenomenon. In the first place,that parents lovetheir children too much is the root cause. Specifically，based arecent survey ,a majority of parents admit that theywill help their childrenmake every choice when it comes to some big issues. Inthe second place, thatsome parents want to realize their unfulfilled dreams mayconstitute anothermajor reason.

Therefore, totackle thisproblem, feasible steps

should be takenbefore things getworse. It is suggested that children should enhance theirawareness of independence.Only by taking effective measures can the prospect ofchildren be rosy, hopefuland promising

电脑-四幅图

解析：

这套题目要求大家描述图画，然后对图中的现代生活进行评论。根据图画可以看出，现代人生活工作中都是电脑。难点在于描述图画。提供两个写作思路：

负面

第一段：图画描述+电脑在现代生活中有消极的影响

第二段：原因分析\危害分析

第三段：建议措施

中性：

第一段：图画描述+人们的生活工作中都要使用电脑

第二段：原因分析

第三段：建议措施

范文为负面思路：

As isdepicted inthe cartoon, there is a young man who uses the computer no matter intheoffice,at home and in his spare time. What’s worse, the computer evenappearsin his dream. （图画描述）The picture reveals to us that the computerplays a negative rolein our modern life.（现象描述）

Thereasons whythe computer has a negative impact on our modern life as follows. (主题句)First ofall, it is not good for our health to usecomputers for fun at home after awhole day facing the computer in the office.（原因一）For example, a majority of young men watch soap operasor movieswhen they come back home. Actually, they lack exercise.（原因一展开）Besides,lots of people only contact with theirfriends through the computers, which isnot beneficial for the friendship. (原因二)Based on a recent survey, an increasing number ofpeople onlychat with their friends on the Internet.(原因二展开)

In aword, usingcomputers all the day is not a good lifestyle in the modern life.Takingabove-mentioned factors into consideration, we should advocate ourfriends notto use computers too frequently. If we to do so, we will have abetter life.(主题句+建议句)

四级第三套图画题。写作思路：
负面：
第一段：图画描述+孩子对于上学有错误的理解。
第二段：原因分析\危害分析
第三段：建议措施

As isdepicted in the cartoon, in the room stays a boy who is saying"why am Igoing to school if my phone already knows everything"to his mother.Thepicture reveals to us that kids has a misunderstanding about going to school.
The reasons for this phenomenon are obvious. First of all,lacking of parents'education can account for kids' misunderstanding. Since a great number ofparents are much busier than before,they don't have time to educate theirchildren.Besides,as is known, the increasingly advanced technology plays animportant role.According to a recent survey,a majority of students acquireknowledge through their phones.

In a word ,phones have a negative impact on kids' understanding about going toschool.Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration,we should advocateparents to spend more time on children' education.If parents spare no effortsto do so, they will give their childrena promising and hopeful future.